June 11, 2005

Too good to Ignore...

Sometimes I get comments that are just too good to ignore. Today was one of those days.

Now, it came as a rambling, run-on post from someone who used the ficticious name "fire@yaho.com" (must be Yahoo's cut-rate division) on a post about divestiture. But being the poet that I imagine myself to be, I looked at it, studied it, and decided that this must be an attempt not to frighten me from Hell's fires, but to be a Contemporary Poet.

You read it, and tell me if I'm right or wrong:

kill whom u want kill....
rape as much u can....
torture as u wish....
open jails and put under arrest whom u want...
do what u want 2 do...
what is last...

one day u will be necked in front of god
and paradise in write
and hill fire in your left
and your book,
what you have done good or bad
god register it
and wrote it dowen,
witeness will your
many will say yes almighty god this slave he done .....
remember when suddenlly without notification u pass away....
alone in dark,mud,humid and tight grave ...
no body will help u
except what u have done
good or bad....
so think about it brother ,
think about.
if u r achristine,
un care human,
beware of the end,
beware of the angle of death,

What do you think? Am I right?

Posted by Mamamontezz at June 11, 2005 06:20 PM

In layman terms, have you seen "Dueling Banjo's"?
I think you're right Mama, "Contemporary Poet" fits.

Posted by: Jack at June 11, 2005 07:24 PM

Just looks like a product of public schools. So dependent on spell check they can't spell their own name without messing up. :)

Posted by: Alli at June 11, 2005 11:43 PM


Posted by: Dana at June 12, 2005 01:34 AM

HOw about Moron?

Posted by: LC/Ib NeilV at June 12, 2005 01:07 PM

I have a funny feeling that English is not this person's first language. ;) The Un-Poet.

Posted by: pam at June 12, 2005 01:14 PM

I think I would feel rather exposed and embarrassed to be "necked in front of God". That would be like necking in front of your parents, only a bazillion times worse!!


Posted by: RightGirl at June 12, 2005 02:02 PM

Dueling Tubas is more like it.

Posted by: bob at June 13, 2005 07:21 PM
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